not my thang
trying to nutt my own preference for music out of the equation, well the drum beat clips badly, theres no bass line, and the melody sounds a little feeble. well, maybe i shouldnt be hard on it sounds like it was made using FL (not the best program ever) i dont know if you should improve this, is it worth it? if u think it is, cut the volume on the bass drum and possibly the snare, add some counter melodies and a gritty bass perhaps, and make the current note progression kick some more ass by lengthening the notes, adding another sound to it, giving it a little more frequency range....hope this helped a bit!